Black Thought

Send me a pm with a link to the work you want me to critique or post one in this thread and that's it These days, I don't have the ...

I'll go first answer : Because if I don't, there's no reason for me to be here.

Question : Why do you write? Condense every reason you write into just a few words. And it has to be TRUE and THOUGHTFUL. No saying "because I can," or ...

Space Elephants : "Her body numbs as he approaches the door."

Hm that long post reminds me of a kid in my Environmental Science class who goes a bit overboard in his debates against religion. He just drones on and on. ...

^^ Thanks, but somehow I doubt your friends wrote many stories like this one. You'll see why in the next part

Part 1: THEN THINGS CHANGED. She sorta took me by the shoulders and forced me to turn to the side and then she kissed me again on the lips. But ...

(18+ for sexual situations involving young people. If that bothers you, read something else.) This is the same character from but in an entirely different universe. Pussy Galore SHE WAS ...

^^^ 2nd one >>>>> 1st one (except for the mouth)

I'm just gonna go for it. You mods can delete it if you don't like it. Please don't ban me! Image removed by Nate. And Natalie Portman looks like a ...

Like too old, I mean In July, 1877, four prospectors were looking for gold and silver outcroppings in a desolate, hilly area near the head of Spring Valley, not far ...

Question. I know it's a lotta kids on this site. Will I get banned for posting a nude model if you can't actually see anything? It's tastefully done btw. No ...

'til. There should be the apostrophe at the beginning. And also, I have just about zero idea what all that stuff is at the end of your post. xD I'm ...

Пеpестройка=Perestroika You know, most dudes can’t tell you exactly when it was that they started being adults. I mean, there’s one point when you just gotta stop and say, “You ...

What's goin on skl02134 This is an interesting piece. To me it reads more like prose poetry, than fiction, which isn't a bad thing at all. I'm just not that ...